The next pass, I think I'd want to work more on Jael's conflicting emotions. For a lot of the chapter, she's just observing Jacob. Now, it's fine for her to be worried about Jacob's reaction to Balt leaving and I DO want to show Jacob's reaction to Balt leaving from her, not his, POV. But this is her chapter, it needs to deal with her thoughts and her emotions, not just her observations.
Things are starting to move in the novel. Chapter 23 and 24 should be pretty good, though I think 23 might have a lot of optional stuff that can be trimmed. We'll see tonight.