I got some good feedback on the third draft of Chapter 2, HOWEVER, some of the last-minute edits did not get proofread and some very embarrassing typos appeared. I swear, if I modify one sentence there's a better-than-average chance two typos crept in. I need to make extra sure to do a full read-aloud pass before I post anything. Typos really can undercut the quality of a piece. And I think Chapter 2 is a lot better for the 3rd revision draft.
Now, I just need to make time to revise Chapter 6 and post it up for commentary. Should have done that Saturday or Sunday but...