Writing flowed well last night, some good scenes between characters. On the other hand, I'm not satisfied with the ending. I suppose that's the point of re-writing. I may end up splitting the last chapter in two and giving Jael another POV chapter after all. I intended for ending to be from Jacob's eyes. But there are some things that I think I need Jael's POV on. Oy, I have a feeling I'll be redoing this ending as much or more than my beginning of Smooth Running. Maybe I'm being to hard on what I wrote. The last line came out just about the way I wanted it to, it almost echoes the first line of the book.
The epilogue is next. I'm still not 100% how to handle it but I have an idea. I'll try it out tonight and see how it goes. If all goes well, I'll be having a late 'I'm done!' party on my blog Thursday. ONLY 21 days late. Ah well.
The epilogue is next. I'm still not 100% how to handle it but I have an idea. I'll try it out tonight and see how it goes. If all goes well, I'll be having a late 'I'm done!' party on my blog Thursday. ONLY 21 days late. Ah well.
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